

Having tried her family's patience for the last time, the unruly Vitessa is remanded to the custody of Lord Glastonbury and his Finishing Program. With a firm hand and a calm manner, he proceeds to tame the young tyrant and turn her into a proper lady. After a thorough, shameful and humiliating medical examination in front of a roomful of doctor's Vitessa's training begins. As the two spend more time together, the older Lord Glastonbury finds himself falling for his ward and all of her charms. Together with the help of the headmistress Mrs. Gladstone and her assistant Thomas, they administer the correct punishments and inspections that begin to teach Vitessa what it means to act in a proper manner. In time, Lord Glastonbury finds himself so taken by his newest pet that he proposes marriage. Despite his strict ways, Vitessa too becomes quite infatuated with her new master. But Mrs. Gladstone, jealous of Lord Glastonbury's affections towards Vitessa, unravels a plot to drive the two apart. When Vitessa finds the woman in Lord Glastonbury's office and in his arms, she is overcome by jealousy and runs from the room. Will Lord Glastonbury be able to win back the young woman's trust? Or will Mrs. Gladstone's wedge drive the two apart forever? This 30,000 word Victorian romance features elements of BDSM, rear training and medical play and shameful humiliation. Review: Four Stars - Cohesively written with few mistakes in grammar. Review: So-So soft porn - More of a novella than a full length book. The initial premise is interesting, but the 'action' progresses too quickly (likely due to the short length of the tale) and incompletely - many gaps in the flow of the narrative. The story line has many possibilities that could have been explored in a longer work. Honestly, I have read many stories that were as well written and edited, some better, in various sexual genres on Literotica. And they were free to read. Samantha Madisen, at the least, needs a competent editor and proof reader.
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C**B
Four Stars
Cohesively written with few mistakes in grammar.
J**B
So-So soft porn
More of a novella than a full length book. The initial premise is interesting, but the 'action' progresses too quickly (likely due to the short length of the tale) and incompletely - many gaps in the flow of the narrative. The story line has many possibilities that could have been explored in a longer work. Honestly, I have read many stories that were as well written and edited, some better, in various sexual genres on Literotica. And they were free to read. Samantha Madisen, at the least, needs a competent editor and proof reader.
R**E
Five Stars
Loved it
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